I’ve received feedback for the entire manuscript from one of the agents. Yay! She didn’t think it right for her. Boo! But she loved the language and world-building – double yay, considering I’m writing in my second language.
The plot is too slow, not suspenseful enough, too many characters. These are all valid points, I guess. I’m still waiting for four more feedbacks – two beta readers, one paid editor and PW’s review for ABNA. I expect them to be on similar topics, really. By the end of this month I should have a lot to think about for the next redraft.
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I’m slightly losing track of my rejections. One from Marsh Agency, one more from Marjacq.
James Calbraith 